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April 16, 2009
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Los árboles, lleno de frutas, de sol,
grítame fuerte en urgente temor,
¡Ardiendo bastante! ¡No más a cortar!
las almas del árboles son muerten
once more.
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My first attempt at poetry in spanish.
The last line just fit so well I had to use it in English.
¿Qué se piensa?

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:iconlilyjamesforever:
Yo amo este...poem. :) I understood it at least and it's wonderful. (And I suck at Spanish. I'm in Hon Spanish 3 and can't believe I'm passing...)
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:iconbear-foot:
Haha, glad you understood it, and liked it. =]
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:iconlilyjamesforever:
Ahahah, yessiry. Que bueno! :)
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`TeaPhotography Oct 5, 2009  Professional General Artist
I faved a long time ago, but I should have commented as well, don't know why I didn't maybe no time? :shrug:

ANyway, I speak spanish fluently, adn I think you did a brilliant job, it flowed very well, and I liked it a lot, made sense very well, and I liked the mix of language at the end, why not??? :D
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:iconbear-foot:
Thanks so much! I was hoping it sounded all right. haha
I really, really appreciate your input =]
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